keep on practising
that was good but some things are missing dont stick in a scale on your solos and dont play too much STAKATO if u know what i mean its annoying and quite not professional , the solo is good u have imagination all u need is more practise for more scales and combination and one u might want to listen from me ...when u play solo play smothly dont think of anything and dont hit the strokes too strong hit them when its needed well done keep on the practise !!